IN and OUT

IN and OUT

 

Only for a second, a brief amount of time.

You stepped into my life, this little world of mine.

 

I could see it in your eyes, the way you looked at me.

I could feel it when you smiled, something meant to be.

 

It seemed I'd always known you, maybe in the past.

You made me feel at ease, happily at last.

 

Then in the blink of an eye, you suddenly disappeared.

You walked into my life, and then you left me there.

 

What am I to do, this tears me upside.

I know I did no wrong, now you wonder why I hide?

 

 

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

A very well written poem with a great running story I especially enjoyed how in an instant or for better use of words a blink of an eye the poem changes direction great flow well done

[Jeff]

Great piece here. Like my friend told me not everyone we meet is supposed to stay in our lives forever. Excellent story telling!

[Frank F. Atanacio]

you write well, yes you are indeed a story teller