like that

when you love someone like that. its hard to take your heart back. he says he loves you. in your heart you know its not true. he kisses you and holds your hand. does he really understand. when he looks at you does your heart drop. when you kiss him

when you love someone give them your heart.

tell them you miss them even if your not far apart.

 

kiss them with every gental touch.

tell them that you love them so much.

 

close your eyes as you kiss.

you will be nervus but dont miss.

 

smile when your kissing and you will feel him smile too.

love him everyday and he will love you.

 

tell him hes your hole world.

let him know you will always be his girl.

 

make sure you let him know.

if you dont then he will want to go.

 

you can never take it back.

when you love someone like that.

Author's Note

listen to ur heart when you love someone or they will slip out of ur arms even though you didnt know. u wont realize what you had until you lose him. i would know.

Reviews

[Mystery Girl]

lovely poem..

[LacyBug]

I like this! But i have to agree with the review above! you really dont know that you have someone and love someone until you loose them! been there done that! But other than that keep up the good work!

lacybug :)

[Emmie]

I liked it. However there were a couple gramatical errors you should go back and fix. I liked the theme of the poem, and can relate to it definantly, as most other could as well. Love is a very vague topic to write about, but you pulled it off nicely. The moral is bound to sink into the readers mind easily.
Nice write, keep writing!
-Emmie