also an experimental attempt at changing up rhyme pattern, just a little. As per most of my works, a living, breathing piece, in continuous development.
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I wish my moral compass could wrap itself around forgiveness. You're a bigger person than me, I tend to hold a grudge, bad I know, good reminder in your poem. All depends on the transgression I think.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
This was about a friend with deep emotion issues, that I love dearly, but have to part with. You are.. read moreThis was about a friend with deep emotion issues, that I love dearly, but have to part with. You are right, not holding a grudge is very difficult, issue to issue. Developming a high plane of consciousness helps. Now, as you may see, I've declared a "Pay it forward Sunday". Go forth with great merriment! :)
10 Years Ago
Ha sounds good to me, as long as I can pay it forward with jurisdiction. Enjoy! ;-)
Cool. BTW, your use of a particular word caught my attention. "Nutters", is now embedded in my lexic.. read moreCool. BTW, your use of a particular word caught my attention. "Nutters", is now embedded in my lexicon!
10 Years Ago
Ha neighbor, what, you don't say that in new yawk?
10 Years Ago
When you are so close to Rochester, you pronounce the R but exaggerate vowels. "RAh-chester" :D read moreWhen you are so close to Rochester, you pronounce the R but exaggerate vowels. "RAh-chester" :D
A small forgiveness can make a big change within and without...Bravo............
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Yes one must go above the fray, and keep one's conduct above the average. Lack of forgiveness is des.. read moreYes one must go above the fray, and keep one's conduct above the average. Lack of forgiveness is destructive to one's self, not the other person. Thanks for your review! :)
A bit of a renaissance man, frequent white-lighter, and poet-scholar of life. Love art and photo. Play a little mandolin, and sing. I study karate, and play wheelchair rugby(Murderball). I've read Haw.. more..