Lonely

People wont leave me alone but,

I will walk down the street and not a single person would notice me

Its like im a ghost in the middle of a super city and yet they still don't care...

 

I could fall of a bridge and not even be seen, 

They would just keep walking along and breath,

Why doesnt anybody care about me!

Why cant they see that im more than they can see!

They wouldnt even notice if I were to scream!

Once im gone maybe they'll realise what they've lost,

I may not be much but I'm more than what they,ve got...

                            -Jaxter_nick

Author's Note

I wrote this bcause this is how i feel in my own life because its true nobody cares or notices me.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Shivam Murari]

So well written. U r great poet.

[SyberRose]

You might edit feel in the last line of the authors note is what I meant to say.

[SyberRose]

Nicely done...No one notices anything anymore...everyone is looking at their phones
and texting. I see you like minecraft...my two little grandsons are addicted to that like I am addicted to the cafe. the only time they talk to me is when they are hungry. ha

[C.M. Dakota]

Oh how often I feel that way. But then I write and realize people like it. So then I decide to channel my pain and anger and insanity into writing. Loved the poem by the way

[Jaxter_Nick]

thanks you for telling me that but its kinda he reason i wrote it

[scripted]

well i have noticed you and your writing if that counts...this is a very honest piece nice job... realize not realise and feel not feal...otherwise it was good

[Jaxter_Nick]

thanks