Beautiful

Beautiful

A Poem by jawan

                                                                                Beautiful

Every day, a new breath

Every day, a new thought

Life is beautiful

© 2014 jawan


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It's true to life and is quite a relaxing poem to read.
You manage to convey the message in just three lines which is really good I think.
Also it's nice and easy to read and yes, life is beautiful.
We need to just stop and see it's beauty
Maybe that could be the last line after "Life is beautiful" -
"Let's stop and look at it in wonder"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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And this poem is beautiful :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


it is indeed and from my perspective it is as good inspiration as our thousand traumas and love affairs so often spawning writes. making it talk to us is where Identification comes in. Barbara

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a very thoughtful poem. Short, sweet, and to the point.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's true to life and is quite a relaxing poem to read.
You manage to convey the message in just three lines which is really good I think.
Also it's nice and easy to read and yes, life is beautiful.
We need to just stop and see it's beauty
Maybe that could be the last line after "Life is beautiful" -
"Let's stop and look at it in wonder"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and powerful poem. You said it all in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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jawan
jawan

Douglas, GA



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