Come Back Home

Come Back Home

A Poem by JaushWilson

[Verse 1]
The darkness starts to clench you
You feel it deep inside
They use their tongues against you
That's why you built your walls so high
Who was it that convinced you
Who pushed you toward this paradigm
Come back home, I miss you,
Just give me one chance to change your mind

It's tough watchin' you drowning
I know it's hard to fight the truth
But this disease you're housing
Is bound to drain the life from you
You know I'll die and fight for you
Till the weight breaks my backbone
Till then I won't lose sight of you
I miss you, Come back home

[Chorus]
You break down, and I hate to see
Your secrets fine, You're safe with me
We could leave here, Right now together
Come and see, Just put some faith in me
Your heart's the greatest thing I own
The past has shown, I can't let go
And your love's the greatest feeling that I've known
I miss you, Come back home

[Verse 2]
Everything's right where you left it
Nothing's changed, Nothing's gone
Your smile still leaves me breathless
And I'll be there when somethings wrong
You know I'll die and fight for you
Till the weight breaks my backbone
Till then I won't lose sight of you
I miss you, Come back home

[Chorus]
You break down, and I hate to see
Your secrets fine, You're safe with me
We could leave here, Right now together
Come and see, Just put some faith in me
Your heart's the greatest thing I own
The past has shown, I can't let go
And your love's the greatest feeling that I've known
I miss you, Come back home

© 2017 JaushWilson


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JaushW - Now that was a heartfelt poetic plea and I most enjoyed the way it latches onto you. Nice work JW. Namyh

Posted 7 Years Ago


JaushWilson

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Namyh. Glad you enjoyed it.
Thats deep, and I'm happy to see someone is speaking out, this really grabs readers attention. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


JaushWilson

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, glad ya like it.
Nice! I really liked the beginning of the chorus.

you break down, I hate to see
your secrets fine, you're safe with me

All in all a good read, kind of want to hear it. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JaushWilson

7 Years Ago

I'm better at writing than I am singing! haha.. but thanks for the input. Glad you liked it.

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