So the Earth Weeps

So the Earth Weeps

A Poem by Jasper
"

Always hoping for a better future....

"

 

If you could see the world

With my eyes and heart and soul

And, God, to step outside of me

To see our common goal

Have shared thoughts and visions

One mind, no indecisions

No this or that, no thin or fat

No rights or wrong, no short or long

Indifference to difference, passion for compassion

Hatred for the hatred and action for inaction

If we could work together

Share our hopes, our dreams and fears

Then maybe we have time

To dry collective tears.

 

© 2008 Jasper


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very good. i liked this part especially...

"Indifference to difference, passion for compassion
Hatred for the hatred and action for inaction"

it had a nice flow and was easy to read. also, very insightful.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice piece! I do believe that the earth weeps for what we do to it. You have such a way with expressing that! Well done.
-Twilight

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jasper
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