I Really not Know

I Really not Know

A Poem by Kenneth Stephen Goodpaster

The sink still is busted, 
dripping chronic drips.
The pipes maladjusted, 
I really not know,
Though, In abundant clouds, 
swarm pestering thrips.
Untouched by misty-shrouds 
of bath while ago.
 Humid air I inhale,
Having to open lips
A razor I avail,
Shaving stubble I grow,
Though slightly my hand slips,
And some blood starts to show.
With towel, I dry face,
Exposing subtle hair strips
With ease, I efface 
Listening to the crow
Accompanied by drips.
Cause? I really not know. 

© 2013 Kenneth Stephen Goodpaster


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So nice poem in so nice rhyme!
Your lines gives a wonderful message.
If thrips are a common sight in your environment?
"Though, In abundant clouds,
swarm pestering thrips."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kenneth Stephen Goodpaster

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and they would be in one not very well maintained.
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear poet :)
Felt your piece as a movie being played in front of my eyes.

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