Can You See the Pride in the Grizzly

This is a Close remake of Tupac Shakur's Poem Can You See the Pride in the Panther.

 

Can You See the Pride In the Grizzly
as he fights for his rightful place
building a path as he passes on the way,
to create peace and love in-between race.
Can You See the Pride In the Grizzly
as she stands on her feet all alone
she doesn’t need a man to protect her regardless
she has the courage of a lion on his throne.
Can You See the Pride In the Grizzlies
as they unify the races as one.
The rose blooms with intelligence,
and overcomes to make us equal as one.

Reviews

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

I really like this. Great work.

"love in-between race." --- If you are talking about more than just one race you need have races.
" protect he regardless" --- her.

[shadadakiya]

wow you did an awsome job on this the grizzly stand's for power love it

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Oooo... I really like this poem... It made me think of my college... we're the Adams State Grizzlies... This is a great poem and i really enjoyed reading this poem... Wonderfully written great job!