Three Rounds

Three Rounds

A Poem by JC

 

Three Rounds
 
We sat on the couch
And pretended to watch
A movie but were
Soon f*****g
 
She wants me to defile her
Corrupt her
Use her
She wants to be my sex slave
Played with like a doll
She has to let me do
Whatever I want
 
After the second bout
Of sex she says she has
To get going
 
We start in on round three
Instead
 
I get my c**k out of
My jeans and make
Her hold it while I remove
Her pants from one leg
And lift her shirt over her tits
 
She’s nice and wet
Tells me to pound her
 
My belt buckle is in the way
So I take it off but instead of
Tossing it to the side I
Stretch it across her neck
And choke her while we f**k
 
I tell her to get on her knees
 
She does it in a daze
 
I bite her back
Push her head down
Her a*s in the air
I want to destroy her
 
I pound and pound
Watching how her labia
Folds around my c**k
And flutters as I move
In and out
 
When I can’t take it
Anymore I pull out and
Cum on her a*****e
Sliding my c**k across it
As we sink down
On our bellies
The cum smeared between us
 
We get dressed
And I walk her out

© 2009 JC


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raw and primal~ for some the thrill is in submission for others in the raging blood of the dominant~ a razor cut of pure sex~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ouch!!..:)..now i am still thinking how to review this one..so very raw and primal..and just as it should be,no mincing of words,no feigning.When you began with,We start in on round three
Instead..and then describe the sex scenario explicitly,i wouldn't deny that i was just hoping that you would take a turn,say something awfully sweet that would make the required social amends..but no this was just unapologetic and cause it was so,it is simply different.It is easy to sit and play such naked words in your mind and think about it all in the comforts of an anonymous identity in a chatroom,cyber world or else just in the privacy of your house..but to come with it in the form of poetry and just being you..without bending for rules is very cool..very much so..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm convinced you've spied on my sexual exploits. :P

Posted 14 Years Ago


i don't even know what to say. haha

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha wow. this is wicked.. (in the BC sense and the dictionary usage sense *wink*)

it's like sitting inside your head, and watching/feeling it all from your perspective. i also like how this could just be disgusting, but the sort of bald language and the elegant structure makes it.. not, for a reason i can't REALLY define
like when i read this:

I pound and pound
Watching how her labia
Folds around my c**k
And flutters as I move
In and out

all i thought of (aside from feeling really warm lol) was.. "wow what an elegant little stanza". thumbs up for writing some very not smutty smut *grin*

Posted 14 Years Ago


fiery lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow... that's intense:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Haha only from you could you find this story so refined.

At this part I was like mmmmm

She's nice and wet
Tells me to pound her


And of course immediately after it went into this... haha

My belt buckle is in the way
So I take it off but instead of
Tossing it to the side I
Stretch it across her neck
And choke her while we f**k


Ahh surprises while reading. Good s**t.

If I ever get into making {highclass girl} pornos I'mma def call you up.
Dig this.








Posted 15 Years Ago



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