Everything Is Nothing

Sometimes the words are ephemeral,
Fleeting or unformed

I take in your ethereal body,
Each line and curve
And delicate protuberance
Leaving me without thought

I live in awe and wolfish desire
To crawl up your flesh
And take that perfectly hard n****e
Between my ravenous teeth...

It is but one stop before your neck,
Pulsating with blood to fill my mouth...

And everything is nothing
Compared to the ecstasy of your lips...

Everything dies for the most delicate kiss...

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Last two lines are killer... Very nice.

[blurry aspen]

The flow is really good and the imagery is great, but what's the starred out word? Was that on purpose? If so, that's neat, it leaves things up to the reader.

[JC]

Hi, thanks for that. there's no starred out word on my end, maybe censored on your end? what part?

[blurry aspen]

"And take that perfectly hard n****e" is what I'm seeing.

[JC]

ha, n****e...maybe it's your settings or WC censoring it.