Don't give a damn

8:43pm Pacific mountain time

and I'm on my last beer

of six and trying to

sip it real slow...

savour that s**t man...

it's the last one...

the buzz will slowly

ebb from this

point

on...

Some sort of

winged insect,

like a sand fly

but I ain't

near no sand,

lands on my arm

and I'm thinking...

burrow in there f****r...

I don't really care...

I'm all earth

earth all me....

maybe I'm more drunk

than buzzed...

Reviews

[inconsistentsea]

Inside, would it perhaps find fire, and perish in what it never sensed was coming?

[JC]

most likely get fat on blood, live fully day or 2with no complications or absolute waste, get smooshed and call it a life

[emily joe]

Winged is my current favorite word. So in addition to my love for simple, stream of consciousness , vulgar s**t, you won me with the word winged. Yeah f**k man that's good

[h d e rushin]

I caught four silver bass and one white perch this morning from a river so clean I could almost see the
bottom. I was all earth with earth being all of me. (what a line). I still couldn't rationalize the killing
of any living thing. Not after Labron declared himself the greatest of anything on earth.
On my final cast, I flung the pole into the river. Which means that whatever we do and call it
supreme and powerful, it's just another way of getting high.

wonderful poem my friend....dana

[JC]

jesus Dana, I want to come to your house for dinner....

[sereenaoutloud]

The fly just wanted some beer too, took a little nip of it running through your blood stream lol
This is a fun write ,,,especially like the last 2 lines...maybe I'm more drunk than buzzed lol

[JayceeC]

This is definitely a stream of consciousness or maybe unconsciousness type poem give the beer? LOL hope that bug did not do to much damage, of course if it took a bit of blood you will now live on in that bug. This was actually a fun peek into your mind.LOL