Thinking of you

I'm picturing you now
in a rural field of
tall grasses,
the sun shining down
on your golden smile

Your hair is full of twigs
your eyes full of joy
and your heart
bursting with adventure

I'm picturing you each day
as I walk these wild
lonely city streets
missing your exuberance 
your love of life and how
you search beyond each
and every horizon

But most of all
I am picturing the
day when I can
hold you close
and say your name
with the reverence
you deserve.

Reviews

[Demii]

This is a very sweet piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading it!

[JC]

Thank you Demii, that means a lot to me that you enjoyed it.

[inconsistentsea]

Say it anyway. Uplifting imagery.

[h d e rushin]

"tenderly drawn"....I stole that phrase from Ms Emily Burns who, when she loves something out loud,
says that. When it touch her soul or made her pause and think beyond the present the lies before us.
Ana said it kind gives her goosebumps.......Me too.....

dana

[Matching Socks]

This is beautiful. So heartfelt.
Kinda gives me goosebumps.

[JC]

Thank you kindly Ana, really glad it made you feel good.

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome.
Ultra-romantic...

[sharonlee]

Beautifully descriptive!!

[JayceeC]

JC well first of all this may get awkward if we don't leave pics up because I'm lazy and sign a bunch of my reviews ~JC...Hopefully the ~ will be enough to distinguish..LOL That said, not only do we share a moniker of sorts (and initials) our styles are very similar, so trust me when I say I love the way you've used the line breaks for control with minimal punctuation. The only thing technical I would debate is if there is truly a need for complete sentences or if it could be tightened a bit here an there.. The third strophe in particular the first two lines. If you drop your beginning pronoun "I'm" and "as" in the next, you still have the correct sentence structure but without unneeded words.
Again in the last strophe look at the second line and consider dropping "am" and using "picture" to keep the verb agreement the same through that hole strophe. very little changes though.
This whole thing made me smile...I was once the country girl who was waited from calls from the city boy a few hours away...and had a few stolen moments on weekends and holidays.
An Excellent read! ~jaycee

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
Sweet sentiment to say the least,
beautiful wording and positive energy:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[HappyFeeler]

This is so beautiful. The purity and piousness of the content is wow.

[Charlotte e.e. Griffith..]

This was such a beautiful piece! Had that very heartwarming vibe to it that a poem of such romantic ways needs - left me with goosebumps!

[~]

ahhhhh... this poem just made me soo happy. A beautiful account of love!! :D

[JC]

thanks a lot moonskittles, much appreciated, if I can make someone as beautiful as you smile I'm a happy man.

[~]

awww.. that was very sweet of you to say JC!!! (blushes)