This is it

This is it

A Poem by JC

I sit in bars and
passenger seats
restaurants and
living rooms,
listening to misery
from my friends
and I always say the
same thing...

"You cannot handle 
the guilt that 
comes with living 
for you
and you alone..."

You have one life...
mortality is real...
there is nothing beyond this...

live.... 

© 2014 JC


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Truer words have never been spoken. It is sad to think of all the people who on their death beds regret everything they have done, and regret everything they have not done even more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is good. It's sort of encouraging in a way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JC

9 Years Ago

Thanks D.T. much appreciated.
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love the flow and positivity great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


This piece clearly shows what a positive outlook you have on life.
Its inspiring and what u said is true.
sometimes people take life for granted. I know I do.
Although every now and again its good to look back at life and see the positive things in it.
To think, as you said. I only have one life so i should live it to the fullest.
Great piece very meaningful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome job, totally true. People need to stop worrying about what might/might not come later and focus on living the life they have now. Dig the quote "you cannot handle the guilt that comes with living for you and you alone...".

Posted 9 Years Ago


it has been proven that elephants are just as intelligent as us. And yet they leave hurriedly and secretly
out of sight of man and his chariot driven heaven; laced with ivory and gold/.
I stayed up well past one am listening to a friend tell me how her man was socking her around
like George Foreman socked around Smokin Joe Frazier. Until I told her to "just live baby".
Enjoy what life is left. By then the "Tonight" show was over and it was easy to sleep.

Love this Jason....dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


JC

9 Years Ago

Dana, even your reviews are insightful and poetic, and above all much appreciated..I need to delve i.. read more
Yes, yes, yes, yes!
I agree with every single word in this piece.
People like to comfort themselves with notions of
afterlife, heaven etc but accepting
at least the POSSIBILITY of nothing after this,
makes the life you fell into that much more precious.
We might better look after it, and one other, if we fully
appreciated the fragile nature of existence.

Thank you for writing this.


Posted 9 Years Ago



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