Do you feel a darkness...a void?

I often wonder what is on the minds of others, if they feel the same
pull towards a darker reality, the breath of mortality on the nape of
our necks a constant reminder to feel everything life has to offer...I
want to know you, not in a polite social way, I want to really know you,
every dark truth, every desire... I've come to the conclusion that
everything we feel is love, every experience we crave is love,
everything deemed immoral or taboo is love... talk to me, let me know
what is really in the heart and soul of women before I leave this
existence...

Reviews

[KirstMind]

The mind a place for the brave...Great piece!

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Interesting question posed and worthy of serious contemplation.

I am not sure that everything one feels is love.. in the romantic definition of love.. as there are some very dark sides to emotions and emotional attachments.

I tend to believe that everything indeed has an energy attached to it, whether dark or light, good or bad, sad or happy, depending on one's perspective. It is this energy that we feel from another... this energy that can combine with the right person and absolutely result in a mind-blowing experience like no other.

This, I have felt and experienced before...

Some of my thoughts, for what are they are worth.

Looking forward to reading more of your thoughts on my work.

Alisa ;-)

[desertgypsy]

enjoyed the conciseness and the cosmic energy of this type, thank you :)

[RahnyJae]

Love the honesty in this. I'm always wondering the same thing when people watching, to the point where I invent entire lives in my mind for people that walk pass. Might get us some scary results in the romance department, but what's love without a little fear, eh?

[JC]

that imagination is what makes you such a creative force and you are right, various dynamics of emotion and physicality and fear can bring people even closer, to bare all literally and and in a sense of complete honesty.

[DreamOn2014]

I like this one. Be careful what you wish for what you may look for May come to pass. You kept my attention with this piece. Well done. :)

[jennifer little]

nice write .. you did a wonderful job on this poem

[misha]

What an interesting piece. Great job!

[Lydia Shutter]

A heartfelt plea. Well written prose. Lydia

[NymphetamineDame]

This is beautiful and I often wonder what is inside of myself.
I often wonder how many people on this earth think similarly top myself and how many share the same opinions and thoughts on various subjects. It really gets you thinking.

[Sophy Freebirds]

When we bare ourselves to someone we hand them a razor to where they can hurt the most. Well as writers we share our personal experiences with readers. We need their feefback not their trust. But here as you have said mind of a woman is what you want to know about. And lemme tell you every woman needs to feel that she is special for someone atleast..depths of heart are unfathomable. When you want to draw conclusions about it you will drown.Enough rambling. Lol. Coming to the poem it is really an inquistive piece reflecting your thirst for knowledge

~Sophy