woman

Woman,

With your joyousness

And your smiles,

The way you dance through nature

And nature moves through you,

You are of the earth

And the earth of you

 

Woman,

Take pity on the man

Who exists starkly

And laboriously,

We see with cold intent

And dismiss

What the Gods

Try to tell us,

Yet,

Even we

Who yearn to move away

From all that is natural

Cannot be anything

But mesmerized

And in awe

Of the woman

 

Reviews

[jonah]

I've been amazed by the existence of our helpers. you depict that amazement and greatness through this poem in an honest way. Great writing

[Lydia Shutter]

The battle of the sexes will always exist in mystery. They do need each other though. Beautifully written. Lydia

[M.A.Rathore]

This is really a good poem about the existence and the place od womanhood in expanding nature...
Thanks sharing...

[JC]

Thanks M.A. much appreciated!

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome friend please do comment om my poem also...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yes you can't deny the existence of woman. From the nation i hail from men are dominating in nature. The psychology of men i.can.do.everything.i.dont.need anyone . Huhhh. But in this poem you have done a nicr thing. You have accepted the truth that you want to be cared by The woman. Mind you the ending grabbed my attention. Every man needs a woman to hold on to. Every man is like a lost kid sometimes and we guide them. A nice write.

~Sophy

[JC]

I'm glad you got so much out of it, I've traveled quite a bit and for sure know what kind of men you are talking about, as a strong minded man it drives me crazy to know that that behaviour exists...if we don't have reverence for each other all we have is distrust and ego mania right...anyway, thank you kindly for your words and for reading.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yes. Mutual respect is key to co existence
Was a pleasure
:)

[MrsBear]

I love how this poem is open to all the wonderful qualities of a woman (:

[JC]

Thanks Emily, I'm glad you liked it, means a lot to me.

[Corset]

Now THAT'S what I'm talking about, lol! just kidding, but this really is a great poem :)

[JC]

yea, i must have been drunk, don't know what i was thinking...moment of weakness I guess ;) i kid i kid...

[Corset]

my favorite so far even if you are full of it tonight :D and as much fun as this has been you are making me nostalgic for a friend who would always win this sort of thing (cause I'd let him mind you)
but now i'm getting a lil bit sad and have to work tomorrow myself so, i gotta roll, have a great night, it was fun.

[JC]

damn, no sadness before bedtime, take a few breaths and smile that life is such a crazy ride.... had a blast myself and looking forward to more reads so keep em cumming (thats my subtle innuendo for the night) cowgirl (that could be one too if you sink as low as i do). Goodnight and have a great day tomorrow.

[B.J]

That was great to read, so enjoyable

[Moon]

This is very nice. I like how you describe women as being "of the Earth". Your words hold much kindness in this piece which makes it very enjoyable.

[MomzillaNC]

This reads like a very ancient ode, as if you'd translated it from some dusty tome. Well penned.

[Girl With A Pen]

A very enjoyable read. This poem could make any women feel powerful and beautiful. Well done :)