In Her Eyes

love

In her eyes I am stronger.

 

I can live in her desire forever.

 

Her look is a blessing as well as a curse.

 

Her beauty is my fantasy.

 

I was invisible until I saw her.

 

That fateful day at the mind eraser.

 

Reviews

[becca]

i love how short and sweet it is among the message and tone of it as well :)

[Celtic Cat]

We do tend to realize our worth when someone else notices it, too. I'm confused by the mind eraser part.. did you lose her just as you found her? A very universal theme... and a joy to read.

[Fran Marie]

Sweet and romantic so nicely expressed and penned~Fran Marie

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Awww! This is great...so romantic and warm!
But this is what true love is all about, Great work!

[Enigma]

That was really good. Well structured, well written...
I enjoyed it. It's romantic and dark in a certain way at the same time. Yet, it's good enough fo a read or two...
I loved it!! Well done!!! ...keep writing ^_^

[strange_gurl]

that's a very moving poem.

[Emily B]

Futuristic, chilling in a way. Maybe because it brings to mind a story I read here once.

But on another level for many of us love is in the eyes of another.