lost love Shannon

my lost love

I saw the ring my stomach turned. Why him? Why not me my love? My long lost love my heart is breaking, my soul is shattered. If I only shared my mind my love. Eyes swelled my life was over you can not be mine

Author's Note

don't brack my hart

Reviews

[vanishing]

jason
there is something great about your style
its from the depths every bit
this is heartwrenching..
the bold text makes the emotion
stand out powerfully...
I really enjoy reading your poems
Keep em Coming!

[Mel Stevens]

are your poems a continuence of each other? I have noticed a certain pattern, but don't know if I am making it up.

Sad but a great poem! Short and to the point. Sometimes not a lot of words are needed to express what you want to say! Great poem!

[logmein]

Short and to the point. I get the message loud and clear.

[Kelley Pascoe]

Very Sad Jason. Good write. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Crazy Cat Man]

good piece......sucks to be in that situation/

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful so glad you ran this through spell checker, I really enjoyed reading this without the distraction. Very powerful and poignant second time round

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful, short and so heart breaking, may i suggest you run spell checker on your poetry as there are quite a few spelling mistakes, I don't normally mind but I feel they detract from the powerful emotions in this poem.