MY LOVE

a poem of love

 

My life, My love, My dream lover. I know you are out there. My love I await you. My heart quakes for you. My love my life long loves. I wish you were here my love.

Author's Note

love power

Reviews

[Enigma]

Now that was really short and really sweet. Pretty succint, I'd say.
Potrays the true feelings in the simplest way possible...
Well written!! Great Job!!
Though you can try to space it out better....^_^

[vanishing]

jason- Beautiful job
Your words speak romance from the heart
even the worm has its own classical tone
what i enjoyed most about this writing
Its straight forward passion held for the one you love
Thanks for sharing!

[Helena]

Ah, beautifully written! How we all long for the "perfect love" in the form of "our dream lover"......Romantic! I enjoyed the read. Helena

[logmein]

I feel like you had more to say here. I love what's here, but I feel you could expand on each line and make it even better. You really have a great tone to your pieces. I look forward to reading more or your writes.

[Sally Edwards]

Great that you have run this by a spell checker, nothing now to distract from your powerful words,beautiful poem

[Sally Edwards]

Short and sweet, nice sentiments, however may I suggest that you run your poems through spell checker before uploading as there are a few spelling errors.

[Moonlit-Blues]

very beautiful, don't give up on hope!

[PureSyn]

:) True love can be found....never give up the hope of it! Very lovely!

Nicole