This is a wonderful poem jazmyne. i feel, your best work yet. It flows, the rhymes work well with each stanza, and there is a deeper meaning behind it.
rain is a good analogy for sadness, and i like some lines in particular. I tried to find which ones, but there was so many! overall, I really like this poem. goes in my favorites.
Nicee! It grips you from all ends of how painful life can be. Everything was flawless. I would change the 1st and 2nd stanza letters tho- both of them start with 'A'....i would put 'I.' Great hun :)
Jaz this is frekin brilliant. Very Good. I love everything about it, the mood is constant and apparent, the feelings are strong and solid, great work...
Very Very Good work.
This is a wonderful poem jazmyne. i feel, your best work yet. It flows, the rhymes work well with each stanza, and there is a deeper meaning behind it.
rain is a good analogy for sadness, and i like some lines in particular. I tried to find which ones, but there was so many! overall, I really like this poem. goes in my favorites.
you may have broke my heart, but ill be the one that haunts your dreamz!, AZ
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i am very stuborn and never liked pple telling me what to do. expecially what to write. i loved my english classes but didnt get along with the teachers cause the way i wrote wasnt what they wanted. m.. more..