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 bottling up your emotions

never letting them show

day by day you get weaker

afraid to let them know

wanting something more

something better then this

but how to walk away

when its them you'lll miss

finally get the courage 

you pack up your bags

I love you and goodbyes

Emotions locked away.......you gotta be tough.

Author's Note

nothing really to say about this one.. i was sitting on my bed and just started writting!!

Reviews

[Michael V]

it sounds like a good conclusion to a beautiful story...I bet you have something else written somewhere that missing an ending, cause its right here! try a few you got see what happens, maybe the poem will complete itself.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It's hard to say goodbye to loved ones even though you know it's something you need to do for yourself... a poem of courage and strength, I like it a lot.

[Morgan A Lynch]

i dont know but this one just made me sad.. good poem though .. great job sam.. i wish i could write this good.

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Keep on writing the way you do.Thank you for sharing this one.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

It's a good poem, I can feel the first two lines ...bottlng up your emotions...never letting them show and the end where you finally get up the ...courage ...to go... Thank you for sharing. Debileah