my letter to you

Listen I have something to tell you.

I know it's not much but it's the best I can do.
And I know after reading u'll throw this away.
But before you do, just read what i have to say.

Your arms were the last place I truely felt safe.
And in my heart, I admired your faith.
So I liked you for all of our quirks, even your hair
And although I felt ugly, you never seemed to care.

That last kiss we shared was my last happy moment.
And as you stared at me, I should have shown it.
And as you turned away, I should have confessed.
You were the last of my happiness.

This poem is my last goodbye
To show you that i wont cry.
Everything in this is completely true.
So all that's left to say is:

that I'll miss you. 

Author's Note

i wrote this to someone...i might give this to them when i leave....not sure yet....what do u think i should do.

Reviews

[Dani California]

I think that any words left unsaid can become haunting. If it's on your heart and you need to express it to someone.... then give it to them. As long as you're prepared for the outcome, good or maybe not so good. Don't set yourself up to be let down if that's what you think will happen.

This is a very good write. You're a very talented young woman... keep writing :)

Peace, Dani

[Michael V]

Jaz, you a far better writer than I can be. you have something i lack and that is what I am so spell-bound by your work. Keep it up girl..

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

You rhyme very well, and rhyming poetry, no matter what others say, is challenging. the message rings loud and clear, and from your heart. and i would be suprised if he didn't feel honored and touched to have this letter delivered to him from your hands. good job!!

[Morgan A Lynch]

yeah this makes me sad b/c of who this will go to.... he will not look at it like i did and think it is wondiful

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Sounds like a nice poem to give away. Good job, nicely penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Brandon]

Nice job. Had a pretty good flow to it, and overall nicely written.