this heart

not sure what this is...kind of a working piece

Take this bleeding heart

Rip it from my chest
Save my last breath
You can have what's left

Take everything I own
It's more yours then mine
I love you,I hate you
Words can't define

My emotions are mixed
My mind has been infected
I can't think clearly
My heart has been rejected

I'm uncomfortably numb
Worn and tattered
My life is destroyed
The pieces are scattered

Hidden pain
Within the crimson tide
Fluent flow
I'll die with pride

I'm dying,I'm already dead
What did you intend?
I'm to selfish
I'll break before I bend

I'm leaving now
This isn't what you planned
ive gotta fix me 
But you'll never understand

I've moved on
No past glances
This can't be repaired
There's been many chances

Goodbye my heart
theres one last thing to say
I love you,I hate you
As I turn and walk away.

Reviews

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

I know this is a really late review... but I was really amazed by this. Jaz, you really have a beautiful way with words. Don't ever stop writing. Your stuff always blows me away.

[I Am THE LADY POET]

this is a nice write. Filled with mixed emotions very expressive

[Brandon]

Wow, very nicely done. Emotions were very well expressed, and it was worded very well. GOOD JOB

[Michael V]

Nice Jaz....really nice. You gota a good, solid, igniting pace that sets the emotion on fire more and more verse after verse. Great way to build some, how would you say, "spunk" to add a little salsa to that taco!!!
I love your work, but i dont need to tell you that, you already know!!