thinking of you

 Dearest boy
I dream of you.
You are so perfect
In everything you do.

In and out 
Of my thoughts you drift
Feeling my emotions
Start to shift!

My heart beats fast
When you draw near.
I love you so much,
You are my dear.

You may never know
My thoughts for you.
I can't help but love
All you say and do.

In my heart
I wish you would see
What loving you
Is doing to me.

Deep in my soul 
You have found space
That was once used
But left no trace.

I sit here and wonder
"What should I do?"
I want to let you know
That I'm thinking of you.

Author's Note

have you ever liked someone and your to afraid to tell him/her something. i wrote this b/c sometimes i feel i do better when i write stuff down rather then have to tell that person how i feel!

Reviews

[Sarajane]

i really like the flow, this reminds me a ton about the things one of my closest friends write to, but never gives, to the boy shes loved for 2 years. All i can say is this is great, and good luck :)

[Brandon]

Very nicely done. It flows very well and was well written.

[Michael V]

My my...that is awsome i love the heart and thoughts turned to feeling and passion...

[Everything Happens For ..]

oh wow, this is seriously fantastic. Maybe introducing a more complex rhyming scheme would give it an extra edge? I dont know lol, just a suggestion. Youre a great writer. Job well done!
xx

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

Very adorable. I enjoyed reading this piece. The rhyming was simple, as was the poem, and it gives off a sense of cute, naive innocence... Great job and thanks for sharing Jazmyne. =)

[Baby Boy]

Wow! This is just too beautiful Miss Jazymyne and I ccan feel the love in your heart fr this person through your words! Excellent write sweetie and in my opinion you should tell him! :) One luv gurl! Holla at ya boy!



-JC-

[LostCauze[:P]]

Such an entertaining piece to start off my morning. The flow the poetry was great except for one problem. "That" on the last line on the first stanza seemed out of place and obstructed with the flow of the poem. After the first stanza the rhythm and the flow were back and it was throughout. The rhyme scheme never failed and you went through with it even through the end. You have no idea how many people just give up on the rhyme scheme because they couldn't find a word that rhymes with what they wanted to say. I really understood where you were coming from with this poem because well I'm in high school and this topic matter seems to swarm in the high school environment. Besides everything I've just said, this was a pretty good poem. Great write.

[ah]

this is really really cute and beautiful, thanx for posting, keep writing... i really enjoyed it