luv u!

luv u!

A Poem by Jazmyne

I'll be here for you when you feel down,
take your frown, and turn it around

I'll be here for you when get mad
make something good out of all the bad

I'll be here for you when things get tough
hold you tight when you've had enough

I'll be here for you when your farthest away
call you up and in my heart you'll stay

I'll be here for you when something's gone wrong
help you through it and we'll move along

I'll be here for you through the good and the bad
ease your pains, when you are sad

I'll be here for you when no one else will
i'll take up your thoughts and your heart I'll fill

I'll be here for you through heaven and hell
listen to everything that you have to tell

I'll be here for you for whatever you need
to take your hand, and follow as I lead

I'll be here for you when nothing goes your way
comfort you and think of sweet things to say

I'll be here for you despite the miles
love you always, in spite of our trials

I'll be here for you when your at your lowest low
to hold your hand and watch our love grow

I'll be here for you when you start to fall apart
hug you and help you to follow your heart

I'll be here for you when you say what I've waited for
kiss your lips and say, "I love you more" 

© 2008 Jazmyne


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Very nice job on this one. Flow was very well done, and wording was great as well.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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beautifully written

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thats what Im talking about!!!
Good Job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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i love this poem. when u love somone you will always be there for them no matter what. very nice..i like how u wrapped all of what u had to say in it. im sure that is what many other people try to say to there loved ones but cant get it out and it turns in to word vomit. u did it, be proud of your work cause i am! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very well done. Beautifully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A bit clich� in some areas, but overall, a very nice piece�whoever you wrote this for is a lucky guy�

Posted 16 Years Ago


awwww this is so nice.. i loved it. and i cant wait until you can give it to someone.

sis

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow! Now this is beautiful Miss Jazmyne and whoever this is written for is one lucky man! :) Every verse was so touching and I can see that you have a big heart! :) Great write gurl and most of all I can feel your words! One luv sweetie! :)


-JC-

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Jazmyne

you may have broke my heart, but ill be the one that haunts your dreamz!, AZ



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