whats the point

Whats tha point in living life,

if all it brings is pain?
Whats tha point in living life,
if hurt is what we gain?

Whats tha point in living life,
if we have a broken heart?
Whats tha point in living life,
if we have it torn apart?

Whats tha point in living life,
if everythings going wrong?
Whats tha point in living life,
if we feel we dont belong?

Whats tha point in living life,
if endless tears we cry?
Whats tha point in living life,
if all we want to do is die?

Reviews

[Kelsie :]]

wow.
i really like this. it really makes me think. i think u you have to figure all this out while your living it. things will always go bad...and dont u love them when they go right?

[Morgan A Lynch]

very nice poem. but very very sad content. the point in living life you will have to find within your self and not from someone else.

i liked how you repeted what is the point in life

very nice touch.