my sister

my sister

A Poem by Jazmyne

 When we were younger it was hard,

To say these things to you.
But now that we're older,
This is something I have to do.

I have to say how much it means,
When you call me to say Hey.
Just that one little thing,
Can brighten up my day.

It's nice to finally be close,
And know I can talk to you.
It's fun to just hang out,
And see the things you do.

I'm glad that we are friends,
And that we finally see eye to eye.
Sometimes when I think about it,
I could almost cry.

This is just to say thank you,
For all that you've helped me through.
This is to say, dear sister,
That I will always love you.

© 2008 Jazmyne


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oh just beautiful. i love this one. you really touched me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Lovely. I finished reading and wished I was closer to my brothers and sisters.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Personally, I thought this was very sweetly said hehe- Really awesome words to remind a loved one that you love and care for them. Nicely done!

Mikey

Posted 17 Years Ago


That's awesome, J. Very simple and you said all you needed to say, it seems. I'm sure she appreciates this piece. I, too, had a rough time with my brother growing up. Unfortunately, we still don't see eye to eye. However, if we did, I hope it would be something like this. Again, great write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful way to tell your sister how you feel.
Nicely written

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhhh thank you so much.. i got all ahhh and sappy when i was here at work.. i liked how u made it flow so nicely and ok i think i am done crying on the keyboard.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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you may have broke my heart, but ill be the one that haunts your dreamz!, AZ



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