- why?

- why?

A Poem by jasmine_x
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not really sure, just something i felt :/

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Why should I pretend I’m happy? This smile on my face is fake
Why do I cry during the nights I lie awake?
Why should I hurt myself? Why should I cry?
Why do I love you? Why should I try?
I don’t understand what I’ve done for you to hate me?
.. The scars don’t heal, the pain won’t go.
The things you’ve made me do; only I will know.
You say you love me, let me know when... when you decide for it to show.

 

 

 

© 2010 jasmine_x


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short and to the point, and powerful with emotion. it was a great poem! nicely done! i liked it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this, it feels real. A lot of poems like this that I've read are written by people who've not actually experienced the emotion, and you can tell in their work. Great poem ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the emotion and conflict that is portrayed in this poem. It feels real and convincing. I've favourited it. I'm also loving the emphasis on the why's/

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww jazz thats well good! i cant beleive you made this 'problem' into a poem! its pure talent! things will get better soon baby i know it :) i love you

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nicee.. Liking the use of emphasise on the why's. Aimed at anyone in particular??
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Posted 14 Years Ago


...Damn...
thats really really good; short, to the point, you really don't f**k around do you :)
100

Posted 14 Years Ago



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