- why?

not really sure, just something i felt :/

Why should I pretend I’m happy? This smile on my face is fake
Why do I cry during the nights I lie awake?
Why should I hurt myself? Why should I cry?
Why do I love you? Why should I try?
I don’t understand what I’ve done for you to hate me?
.. The scars don’t heal, the pain won’t go.
The things you’ve made me do; only I will know.
You say you love me, let me know when... when you decide for it to show.

 

 

 

Reviews

[thatbryngirl]

short and to the point, and powerful with emotion. it was a great poem! nicely done! i liked it!

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

I love this, it feels real. A lot of poems like this that I've read are written by people who've not actually experienced the emotion, and you can tell in their work. Great poem ^^

[tynamite]

I love the emotion and conflict that is portrayed in this poem. It feels real and convincing. I've favourited it. I'm also loving the emphasis on the why's/

[ryanfox1992]

awww jazz thats well good! i cant beleive you made this 'problem' into a poem! its pure talent! things will get better soon baby i know it :) i love you

[[KL]]

Nicee.. Liking the use of emphasise on the why's. Aimed at anyone in particular??
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[Sherratt133]

...Damn...
thats really really good; short, to the point, you really don't f**k around do you :)
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