A fresh start?

Isn't it amazing,

How it's gone so fast?

Arguements happened,

But it's all in the past...

Can we forget it,

Just start a fresh?

Instead of competing

Both being second best,

I miss the good life,

When we was young,

As much as you hated me..

You was always number one.

Reviews

[tynamite]

Yeah people are like that arguing over rubbish oblivious to the fact that time is passing by. I see this happen so many times in my life that it's untrue. I've favourited it.

[Antonio Valentino]

Life is an ending of fresh starts. Enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing it with us.

Antonio :)

[Jared Fellows]

Clever and unique, I like it.

[José Humilde]

Nice poem. Can definitely relate to the emotion that you are expressing here.

I think that my only suggestion is to put some question marks in there. I had to read it a few times and figure out where the questions were.

I don't know what is formal or informal, as far as poetry is concerned...but I like how you underlined always. It makes my eyes pick up on the importance of it, which is great!

Thanks for sharing

-JH

[Jessica]

It doesn't matter about her english Kasim lol. She might have meant it. Oh wait she replied to you >.< never mind that comment. Very good Jasmine. I love the fact that always is underlined. Makes it really stand out. Well done. :)

[jasmine_x]

sorry, my use of standard english sucks!

[[KL]]

were* jasmine :L
you have a tendency to say "was" instead :P but nevertheless, the quality of your work is great =D no matter how s**t you think it is.. Good work ;)