Losing Sight (Intro)

A intro story about a women who has lost her son and her husband to a tragic death. This is just a preview.

It was now Autumn, 2010, the leave was being to fall off the trees. Time of change, new starts.
As Layla sat on the bench, at the playground. She Quietly  Watched the small children Play.
She looks up a the sun, closing her eyes feeling the warm heat dry the tears on her face.
She looks at all the small children playing.
It seem to make her feel calm being here on days like this.
The way the children was happy and carefree. Not knowing what this world was capable of.
She looked across the grassy field,
Seeing a young boy laughing.
He look similar to her son, Forest.
The emotion, she tried ever so hard to hide from. Hits like a lighting bolt to her heart. Shaking all the way down to her soul.
But in some way being here still brings her peace.
Watching The children play and laugh. It has been four years now. Since the loss of her husband and son, Forest.
Her husband have such a fight over that name.  She felt a smiled cone across her face.
But it suited him all so well.
Her little Forest.
Such pain struck her heart. Just saying His name.
But let's Start from the being when it all begun.
Where it all started.
7 years ago..........

Author's Note

I am starting a book. I'm look for true thoughts about it.
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Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Sounds like a very interesting story... I think you have already drawn the reader towards your story... There is a sad feeling of loneliness in the poem that really stands, and also the way she tries to find solace in seeing the children playing in the field with a freedom... I'm looking forward to this frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MightyMouse]

I like the idea for this book. I've read al of your other work, and this one really stands out. I can't wait to read more of it.

[Jasmine]

Thank you i have more parts to the story on here under losing sight i will try to get more of the story posted later. Thank you for your review 😀

[MightyMouse]

I know. I've read them :). And no problem.