Easter Memories

Beautiful Easter eggs hidden around,

Just waiting, waiting to be found.

Eggs of different colors and sizes,

To a child, all are surprises.

The eager children were quickly told

A giant pink bunny, so bright and bold,

Had hid the eggs the night before,

"So go and find them, go explore!"

The children raced and flew around,

Looking for any egg above the ground.

Once an egg was found, they squealed with delight,

But most were completely out of sight.

Easter, a bliss and joyous day,

Brings families closer, as they say.

Children happily playing with each other,

And also loving their father and mother.

Happy Easter!!

Author's Note

This is my first rhyming poem, took me like a hour. Please review, maybe some tips on rhymes??

Reviews

[Cathy Wattam]

Great job for your first rhyming poem. Most of my poetry rhymes so rather giving you tips, maybe check out some of mine and see what you think? Reading other people's work always gives me inspiration. You captured the spirit of Easter so well done!

[Tina Kline]

A really fun and delightful Easter poem. I think you did a great job on this.

[Michael G.]

I'm not one to talk about rhyming, as I use a free style approach in my writing... but, I had no problem with following the flow and rhyme of this piece.
Good job! Lovely, light piece.
Keep writing!

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