Thinking Out Loud

Its about my true love and the addiction I pursue for him.

 

 THINKING OUT LOUD 

My body rests, 

My mind works.

My eyes stare,

My silence hurts.

My thinking is stupid,

My ability is worth.

My talent is brilliant,

My confidence is a jerk.

My emotions are noisy,

Their meanings are a thirst.

I search to open-up,

Busy people out bursts.

I’m always thinking you, 

Oh! My perfect efforts.

Whatever I think, 

Your name come first.

I started up for myself, 

But in the poem you exert.

Now, I’m in my body,

In my mind, you burp. 

                            - JAGJIT KAUR

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts leading to the surprise ending. Good energy in the words. Was a enjoyable poem to read.
Coyote

[Pwincess J]

thank u soo much, u added on to my zest :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.