unkown

You speak the opposite meaning then what you already spoken!

Contradiction sparks the flames of provocation

Manufactured identity, cuts of freedom of being open

In and out of different kinds of matrix

Or is it that find yourself caged in

The shadow became the body and body became the shadow

The loss of heart and soul, is the creation of a halo?

No need to rest, no sense to your eyes

Reality cloaked in a labyrinth of lies

Yet if you seek you shall find,

a person that's blind finds the true ability hidden in the depth of ones mind.

Author's Note

can,t find good title for this piece.... what do you think it should be called ?

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

Dear Jamal,

I believe I would name it "Unknown" because you are unsure what to call it. What do you think?

"You speak the opposite meaning then what you already spoken!"

1. Poetry
2. Caring
3. Love

These are the 3 things of which is meant here.

"Contradiction" is the way of the world my friend.

"The loss of heart and soul": beauty within these words. It is your expression.

"labyrinth of lies"

Beautiful depiction of deceit; it reminds me of the film, "Labyrinth."

FAVORITE LINE

"a person that's blind finds the true ability hidden in the depth of ones mind."

1. Blindness is a blind bat.
2. Hidden secrets.
3. Flawed perfection.

love,
ria

p.s. Keep writing, Jamal:D

[jamal]

thank you soooo soooo much for the wonderful review and i am sorry for the late respond i havent any time for poetry anymore atleast for a while :(

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write Jamal...Thank you for sharing...:)

[jamal]

thank you for takeing the time for reading it! means a lot :)))

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)