Unknown

some are bred for false success,
others find inner peace from the dream their actions achives,
cloacked in shallow stress, hides the hidden potaintal in depth,
driven by faith while another walks with anguise and pain,
ones loss is anothers gain.
The oppsistion, one speaks loud while the other sits in silence atempting to listen.
The true path lies in ones conviction,remove the rift that divides
an empty space face to face, who speak truth and who lies?
fire and ice, change of role may come as suprise,
awoken from your slumber, the choise still remains open.

Author's Note

Hi! I havent been doing poetry for a while as i am been busy with work :((( i had time to finish this poem last ;) i cant figure out the title for it tho :O comment tell me what you think... have a great day :))))

Reviews

[Marissa Brazzell]

Very good

[Empty Spaces]

empty space