Night falls

If the sky's fall's down, It's gonna be alright, cause I got you here tonight.

Night falls


The walk to center stage, the feel of endless cheers.
It only gets stronger by each step,
the excitement and rush courses through my body.
Ignite the confidence,unrivaled love for music, my true accomplishment.
If tonight is my last, ill do it for those who listen until the night falls,
if tonight is my last, ill do it for those who recognize themselves as a star
sing the song in this endless dream, if tonight is our last,
lets do it together,forever while we never say never.
This moment is timesless, untradeable,pricesless.
You can never sever this bond, heaven and earth, together we stand strong.
How can i ever leave, yet the curtain has to fall, how can i ever forget,
moments like these they die hard, the echo of the night fall still lives on.
If tonight is my last, ill do it for those who listen until the night falls,
if tonight is my last, ill do it for those who recognize themselfs as star,
sing the song in this endless dream, if tonight is our last,
lets do it together,forever while we never say never.

Author's Note

If the sky's fall's down, It's gonna be alright, cause I got you here tonight.

Reviews

[scripted]

What a lovely write!!! I have to say that this piece was jjust right, every word fit in perfectly... It was a beautiful poem and I thing it was very well exicuted... These words put together made an amzing write!!! Thank you for sharing my love, Danielle

[jamal]

Thank you for the kind words Danielle :)

[coryhardwick]

thats just down right awesome more like these you could be __________!!! you fill in the blank

[jamal]

haha thank you for takeing time to read and review! :) "a awesome song writer" wishful thinking :p

[EChaps]

This is cool! I second everyone else; it sounds like the lyrics to a song. Just watch out for a couple of spelling mistakes, i.e. "themselves" instead of "themselfs," etc. but otherwise it's great. :)

[jamal]

Thank you EChaps :) i will keep working hard on my spelling errors, im happy you like it!

[Frieda P]

At first I thought this was the rush you get from being a musician and having all eyes diverted in your direction and the high you get from that...your author's note makes it seem as though it's about a relationship, either way, good read.

[jamal]

Thank you for the kinda words ;) Frieda its was what you first thought it was forget the author's note i couldnt stop writing xD for that im sorry :)

[Jem Sagcal]

That was lovely to read! It's just like reading lyrics to a song.

[jamal]

Thank you Jem :) im happy that poem came across that way!

[Will]

You show alot of strong emotion here. I love it. I particularly like this line: "if tonight is my last, i do it for those who recognize themself as a star." Keep writing!

[jamal]

Thank you Will! I am happy that you can find a line that you like :)