Endless Search

It begins with the joy of a beer,and company..

Every day is the same, nine to five

It can make you yawn at times,

walking the straight line.....

The endless search for something greater then you can imagine

To throw everything out of balance, will it ever happen?

Will this life truly matter? To do something greater then climbing society ladder....

It makes one wonder if you can reach that point....?

And if you do what will happen?

If you close your eyes, what would you see? In the depth of your heart what is it that hides?

Well......

Mine is true peace......

Fear of not trying is killing my soul....if You had a fear what would it unfold ?

The vision of me resting on the grass got me sold.....

If you had a vision of yourself what would it look like?

If you could leave the reponseabilty that chains you down, would you leave ?

Would you trade the responseabiltys for something ? If so what would that be ?

If the door of greatness appears, would the path be clear? Like foot prints on the snow.

Would you open the door?






                               Yes, maybe or no ?

Author's Note

my last poem for a long while :) i hope enjoy it!

Reviews

[Frieda P]

All pertinent questions, and what many people question in this fast paced world of ours. Peace is always an exclusive issue, which I think can be fleeting at times. Responsibilities and real life, etc get in the way of finding our true bliss. I love this write, it makes me ponder so many of the questions you've posed here....much food for thought. Excellent jamal.

How do you know this will be your last, I never know when the notion will hit me...

[jamal]

Thank you for the awesome review first all! well i was writing this poem it gave me a lot to think about and i think that its going to take me a lot time to get over this point in my life before i can start writing again

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I don't know about you but writing helps me tremendously, good luck with whatever you decide to do!

[jamal]

Thank you frieda :)

[Will]

That straight line we all walk perplexes me... I try to make it curve, and sometimes it does, but mostly it won't. I wish I had the answers to these questions, but I don't. Hopefully we'll find them. A wonderful read that made me think. Nicely done.

[jamal]

thank you for your review :) and thank you for sharing! :)