Acceptance

Acceptance!

Most of the time, my voice is darkness follow by silence.
I have my right to speak so why I should I hide it?
The cliff just got bigger, I walk in your shadow
But don't need the mind state of killer...
I can paint you a picture, but don't tell me you can't describe
The actions in the moments that kept us alive?
I breathe for a second,I can never say I never try's to reach heaven
I am just a simple man, twisted my own fate in one hand (All in)
I try's to tell you, but you said I can't
Like I was lost in space, but today I swear I land,
this road took me this far,
now you want me to walk on fire
But tell me when do I hit the wall?

Author's Note

comment please good or bad all comments are welcome :)

Reviews

[Pax]

Acceptance says many things... and its always the root of judgement.... for its hard being misunderstood...

we have our own free will's choice, do what you believed is true and truly you....
if they don't understand, then its just meant that they are just close to any opinion or change...

that's what i thought about this poem.
great job!

[jamal]

Thank you and thanks for heart felt words! :) im happy you could enjoy it

[Pax]

your most welcome my friend.

[marie]

great piece you captured my attention till the end :)

[jamal]

Thank you :)

[fiery-san]

This is quite different...

At first read it's a bit confusing for some reason, the message is a bit muddled. Once again, you might need to proofread because there are some parts that are grammatically wrong which adds to the mixed message you're sending...

But I've reread the poem and in my own understanding, it's saying something about being hindered from expressing one's self that despite doing it all, it isn't enough...

Did I get it right?

[jamal]

Your right fiery :) but this poem became somewhat of a fail.... I dont know what to do with this poem :(

[fiery-san]

That's okay, writing is a process and we don't make masterpieces overnight. As for the poem...we can't redo what was already written but we can improve to make those that haven't been written even more beautiful. Don't force or frustrate yourself too much... inspiration comes when you least expect it. ^_^

[jamal]

Well said! :)