true emotion

about a girl

took a chance for the small amounts of hope

we saw sunlight for miles

as we gazed through the telescope

i held your hand and felt the surge of love

hope once new as children is rememberd

the gods watched me steal their star from above

a role of the dice for all the riches in world

swim through frozen streams just to make you a house of pearls

watching you laugh and flicking your hair

i cry at the water face

and show you odd ways that i care

falling for you is a feeling that shakes all my bones

makes my hair rise up

time stops and turns into the rarest stone

never to fast to judge

and never to weak to quit

heart pure as gold

when with you its like the moon lost at orbit

always suprising and filled with love

thinking of others

and as gentle as a dove

whenever im lost in the clouds

the warmth of your smile is what always brings me back down

Reviews

[Evelyn Storm]

You really captured the euphoric feeling of new love in this poem. Just one grammatic errors.the gods watched me steal there star from above. You could replace there with their. Really touching poem.

[jaredcp25]

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