I  wanted

I wanted

A Poem by janzsuico

I wanted to hold your hand
every time you forget calling me
"Dear"

every time your day turns awful
that takes away the smile you have saved 
for me

every time your head turns to another direction
where your eyes reach for far distant scenery

every time I make you piss off with my 
"Pleases" and "Teases"

every time you want to go out alone 
to meet "Beer" nearby the drunkard store

every time you need a hand to hold on 
to wash away some "Jades"

every time you are unable to say
"I love you".

But it turned out to just I wanted and
never would it be your turn to say
these lines in front of me 

now, 

even just to think of these now.

© 2015 janzsuico


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jb
Great job of heart felt poetry:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I wanted to hold your hand
every time you forget calling me
"Dear"

Its simply great write and expression is heart touching.
Love this one friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


janzsuico

9 Years Ago

Im so glad to hear it from you Saddam.
Beautiful expressions about love, great work my friend...

Posted 10 Years Ago


janzsuico

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much....
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome

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janzsuico
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