Too Young

Too Young

A Poem by janzsuico

You are too young to say those words that can make a day
You are too young to hold a promise based from what you see
You are too young to give a smile and pretend to be fine
You are too young to depend everything in a sign.

Yes, you are too young and don't ask WHY.
I am too young to believe in all those pretty lies.

Because we are too young to grasp the future
Too young to be mature, too young to venture
Let time do the chances in our lives.

© 2014 janzsuico


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Let time do the chances in our lives.

Interesting view and nice write too.
Loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


janzsuico

9 Years Ago

Glad you loved it Saddam.
Interesting view on being too young. "Yes, you are too young and don't ask WHY," sounds like lyrics to a indie rock song. I like it.

:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


janzsuico

10 Years Ago

Thanks Devon.. very much appreciated!
this is very inspiring. i enjoyed this poem.
(We are all young. the oldest people are the ones who made us this way)

Posted 10 Years Ago


janzsuico

9 Years Ago

Thanks Talia. Im happy to hear it from you....

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janzsuico

Cebu City, VII, Philippines



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