One-way

One-way

A Poem by janzsuico
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What do stoplights mean for a passer-by?

"
Car ------ stopped
let me pass by
to where the next stoplight stands

waiting for another passers-by
to stop and chat for a while.

Buzzing, oh words of chit-chats
going nowhere

fled by the air
to the heavens and skies

fall back down by the rain
and kiss bitterly the earth

where people once stepped by
as the green light signals

"go"

© 2014 janzsuico


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This pertains to life, not only stoplights and such, a clever read. Love the lines....
fall back down by the rain
and kiss bitterly the earth

That's a go. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


janzsuico

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot lady Frieda P... Glad you like this piece! It's a good try though.
fled by the air
to the heavens and skies
A creative mind always think something new and unique and i must say you have one. very nice and quite well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


janzsuico

10 Years Ago

I am so glad to hear your comment Ssadd about the lines in the poem... thank you so much...
Saddam

10 Years Ago

it is absolutely my pleasure dear.
Saddam

10 Years Ago

it is absolutely my pleasure dear.

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