Us

The story untold

 

                 When it comes to us

                                                    There is

                           But one story

                                                 To be told

                                                                   The end

 

Reviews

[Nautili]

The end is a bitter reality to be consummated forever in death.

[ErosNthanatos]

A death to everything...bittersweet

[Selena Chapman]

Oh no, that's so sad! Incredibly powerful though, they way you've layed it out. I liked it, thank you for sharing.

[Bell-lala]

Wow. a short and powerful poem. you fabricated such a perfect relatable poem :)

[Ruth]

Oh wow!!!
This hit hard and made me reel lol
Perfection!
The form is cascading, pure impact...
xoxo

[*** Hey Jude***]

The format you choose make the words even more poignant! Well done ~ :-)

[Muse]

There's something so captivating and sad about this word flow. Despite "The end" , it seems open ended..is that all? You leave the reading hurting...is the story good...bad? We want more. This was powerful despite the brevity. High scores.

Muse

[justAlanna]

So simple, so beautiful.

[that-little-green-monst..]

Wonderful job with this poem. I love the simplicity of it and how few words you use. Really nice job!