A Thin Spherical

Flowing freely

Created by a breath of wind
Slowly the appearance developed
Struggling violently at first
To come forth
Almost to be destroyed
In that instant of thrashing about

 

The desire for freedom was stronger
Growing at first colorless
With the desire of motion
Slowly maturing fully
Seeking independence
While the wind supported its weight

 

Floating jubilantly experienced by life
Nevertheless the ecstasy lasted
Merely a few moments
Of that precious existence
Life color beauty, were inscribed within
Slowly breaking awy from its creator’s grasp

 

Not knowing not feeling not understanding
Upon entering this world
This unique tiny bubble achieved
Complete tranquility and freedom
Before its demise
Will you

 

 

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A Thin Spherical

 

Reviews

[Gray Witch]

I needed to go back before going forward with your work. This first posting is significant to me - was it so for you? Love poetry and poets but sometimes I just don't understand them...This I do. Thank you!

[Priscilla Sayers]

An inspiration write. A beauty that flows through the reader. this creates a calmness within me. Always there is that will to fight for tranquility and freedom. Always there is that hope to cling to moments before they pass. A well done free flow!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a captivating and rewarding piece. I enjoyed this read.

[VelvetRosetta]

I love this piece of writing it just blooms before my eyes...such beauty in the birth of anything new, be life, nature or love...simply breathtaking!

[Lily Mae]

The best of creation and birth..and what ever comes after... xx

[Emily B]

these are perfect words . . . sorely needed, you couldn't have posted at a better time

good to see you