EVENTHOUGH

i poem i wrote while i had a meltdown at school, because of my life.... i want to sucide,

EvenThough

even though you're not

the one who i want

even though you're not

the one who i thought

even though it's reality

i wish it was a dream

to test your quality 

to let me free to scream.

 even though it was a joke

i thought it was real

even though it pokes

that was on the big screen

even though i want to die

i also want to live

to know why i'm here at lif

to know that i'm here to give

even thoughlife is a game

you could lose in it

even though its lame

let the bulb of living lit

even though i'm not in the hall of fame

i would say to the world good bye

i wish nobody would do the same

when they find that their best friend died

Author's Note

i wish you could understand this poem, this is a letter for my self. i wish you could understand the suffering i had

Reviews

[paddy d daly]

your poem is very emotional and expresses so very well the feelings that you had at that time in your life, we all suffer pain in our life, both young and old but usually we get through it as I hope you did, keep on writing, you are so good for your years.....