3.THE EMERGE

3.THE EMERGE

"You mean The Darkness is from a black hole from space?" I ask. Neon nods. "Obviously his name is THE DARKNESS." Neon says. "And after some observations,  you passed out because the darkness had the enough gravity to pull most of your power so you were too weak to even open your eyes. That proves my theory." He continues.

"And how would your theory help us, Smarty Pants?" I ask eagerly. We are standing in the middle of a a jungle. Not totally a jungle but it has some grassy space. We are in Mesoamerica or Central America as we call it. I always loved history. My most favourite ancient culture is Egypt. Ancient Egyptians were brilliant! Their civilization is more than seven thousand years and still they are one of the most important civilizations in the world. well more than America. 

"If we could search more about how to stop black holes I think we could stop The Darkness as well." Neon answers. 

" Good idea Smarty Pants but we need to keep moving." I say.

We get out of the bushes and stand infront an amazing pyramid. El Castillo. "Awesome!" Neon murmurs. I nod. Suddenly an old man emrge from the pyramid. And he catchs our eyes.

"Oh, oh" I say. I snatch the translators from the backpack and walk a couple of steps toward the man. " Hello, we are traders from South America and we brought some of our goods to trade it with you." I glance at Neon behind me. His eyes are wide open and his mouth is dropped to the ground. 

"Well, welcome to the Mayan Empire." The old man greets.

You arrived your destination. Please unbuckle your seat belt.

Author's Note

the third chapter of the time player. please send me some information about the mayan empire if you can AND THANKS!

Reviews

[Cleavlnd Groves]

Okay. Looks good, but there are a few other things... As I recall, the ancient Mayans had guards for their cities and territories... How would they get this far without declaring where they were from? Also, the Americas were only konwn as such after they were discovered by Europe... They were most likely known as something else before then. One other small thing; I am pretty sure the ancient Egyptians were all killed off by the English when they took over Egypt. However, it did survive for a very long time, lonnger than most empires and countries that are around today, even. Other than that... This is gonna be good. >:D

[Janna Badawy]

first: i had declared that they where from south america and i didn't want to use north america because it was discovered lately. i searched about it and found that south america and mesoamerica were trading with each other so don't be surprised.

2nd: south america hadn't been discovered by europes. there was alrready a live community at south america .

3rd: i talked about the civilization of egypt. i wouldn't tell difference between ancient egyptians and modern egyptians. and still their civilization is still on because there still no war that could wipe the egyptian from the point that i'm an egyptian.

p.s: and thank you for your review