who would win my heart?

this poem was originally a song but because i can't record it it's written as a poem. i wroteit for the contest " love and loss ". Please review

                              Who Would Win My Heart?                                                       

I enter your heart

You enter mine too.

But there's one question,

Would it be you?

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I'm taking apart

That's fine with you

But there's a question

Who would win my heart?

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I'm not seeing light.

I'm seeing something else.

I'm seeing war

Above our sight.

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I'm gonna fight

to find the one

who would win my heart.

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Who would win my heart?

I guess i would never find.

But... I might.

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Author's Note

i wish you would like my poem. this is for the contest " love and loss " so thank you for reading.

Reviews

[paddy d daly]

you might, but I like that you know you have to fight,