My Beau

My beau, my beau

I'm calling for you

My windows are open

My heart beats for two.

 

My beau, my beau

My sadness fares true;

Your skies are less charming

My skies are less blue.

Author's Note

Very simple; I got the idea after reading Fairest by Gail Carson Levine

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Very simple but sweet : )

I like the simple rhyme. The poem leaves the reader with unanswered question, which is the intent of good poetry.

Keep up the good work!

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awesome...way better than any of mine

[Grace Lea]

Short and sweet, and thats all it needs. Very beautiful piece

[~angelalala~]

this is beautiful. i love the lines "Your skies are less charming My skies are less blue." it is simple but powerful. a beautiful write.

[Str8jacket]

I like it very simple yet sweet.