A set of SET

A set of SET

A Poem by Nhes G.
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just using the word set

"
this word we all know it
just three letters it consists
but be ready..get SET
go and let's explore it!

when there's a ring and a necklace,
well. that's a jewelry SET.
if the book's volume is complete,
then that is one SET.

there's a director and actress
and an actor reading a script.
lights and cameras don't quit
then the taping is on SET.

a powder blush-on and lipstick
are what's in a make-up SET.
can't buy a spoon or fork by piece
for they are all sold by SET.

as the sun rested on the west
and slowly sinking by the beach,
a scenery of colorful rays
so romantic as the sun SETS.

there it goes all the best
SET of words for the word SET
it's all done i bet
is everything SET?


© 2012 Nhes G.


Author's Note

Nhes G.
please let me aware of my grammar

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In the first line you might want to change 'knew' to 'know'. In the second line I am confused by the transition into the third line, did you perhaps mean to put go at the end of the second line? The sixth line the period should be a comma. the twelfth line should be 'you're taping on SET' not 'you're on a taping set'. In the twenty-second line you didn't put the first 'set' in capitals like you had done for all the others, I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, however it does kind of throw the reader off. I hope you find this helpful. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Nhes G.
Nhes G.

Iloilo City, Philippines



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