CALM MIND�S

My first offering

Sunny day’s and dizzy dream’s, moment’s when we are alone, letting the world just pass us by,

Living in a Disney land.

Full of hope’s full of dream’s, taking timeout to wonder in a land of make believe and fairytales,

Letting the mind wonder doe’s no harm, like a child the mind is calm, from time to time we need to do this to keep us all away from harm

Reviews

[Gandré]

This was such a sweet mini-poetic story.. Yes we need to leave our minds believe on fairytale's and dreams... (for mind I found this... ) I liked this sweet wonderful dream. Want more of this!



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"in a fit of absence of mind."

The Expansion of England� (1883) Lecture 1
John Seeley 1834�95
English historian

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[goatcabin]

charmimg thoughts and simple expression a nice beginnng

[goatcabin]

charming thoughts and simple expression a nice beginnng

[These Haunted Hallways]

Very nice and relaxing write. It'd be really great if all of us had this peace in our minds hehe. Cool piece!

B.A.

[R J Askew]

Gentle write which can't be faulted in its msg, with halm/calm/halm feeling 'right'.

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

I really enjoyed this, very much. My favorite line was 'like a child the mind is calm', I have to agree, the mind is just as calm as a child, running around with timeless energy, leaping from thought to thought, never slowing, not conceiving a halt or retreat. I liked this very much, wonderful first write.

[Kevon]

I like it, the mind is a wonderful thing.......People take their mental capacity, and perceptions as only a thought, but it's more than that........It's a gateway, and u have just crossed that gateway.congratulations.I like wondering care free minds like me,and u........kudos to you