The Portrait

The Portrait

Let me paint for you a portrait
Using only words
Of something very beautiful
Wanting to be heard
It's something that is timeless
That's touched me to no end
And the ticking of its source
Comes from deep within
The canvas filled with colors
Portrays a sunrise scene
Of all the beauty still to come
That's ready to be seen
The image of the landscape
Kissed by the morning dew
Reveals a picture of my heart
Saying I Love You

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful words and pictures!! :)

"The canvas filled with colors
Portrays a sunrise scene," I liked the way you worded this. I never been a fan of abstract art, but who doesn't love sunrises and sunsets.

[janetd]

Thank you for your kind review! :)

[Miss Sharon]

Very beautiful and well written! I too love rhyming poetry and you have written it with wonderful imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Sharon

[janetd]

Thank you very much for your very kind review! I enjoy the thoughts and peace when I write which is why I do it. I will read some of your work as well! :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

This is such a beautiful love poem. You have created a wonderful portrait with your words.

[janetd]

Thank you so much for your kind review. Have a great day. :)

[samparks,sam]

this is so sweet expressing feeling I like it